Sunday, July 22, 2007

A Petal's Immortality

55 Fiction is written in 55 words or less. “A Petal’s Immortality” is my first attempt with this type of fiction.

A Petal’s Immortality

A petal drifted upon the dog’s back. Jumping in the river, the current pulled it away.

Landing on the bank, catching a girl's eye. “A treasure,” she yelled placing it in her locket.

Years later she moved to Paris with locket in hand. The petal still captive, yet immortality had been obtained.

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