Tuesday, June 05, 2007

Soda Zip

Soda zip
Not a single carb
Still taste great
Soothes the thirst
Wished there was low carb junk food
Then I may loose weight


Decided to get back in my poetry swing. So I decided to write a shadorma about low carb coke.

3 comments:

Russell Ragsdale said...

Nothing more carb free than a satisfying poem!

Deb Powers said...

Cute! I've never heard of this form before - I'll be checking it out. Glad I found you at Tiel's carnival.

ozymandiaz said...

Ya know suffering is caused by loss...
great poem. Very light, bubbly and fun to read. Good job.